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I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
I was bored, so I decided, "hey, any "yutz" with a computer can log into bleacherreport and write an article, why can't I?"
So I did just that.
I'd love your input, whether positive or negative.
[size=24pt]
Vikings WR Jaymar Johnson Rewarded For His Hard Offseason Work[/size]

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08-13-2009, 01:31 PM #2
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
Very nice but I am biased cause I always like your stuff.

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08-13-2009, 01:57 PM #3
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
You should quote your sources... I'm guessing the ST Coach, Chilly, and CC didn't say those things directly to you and you copied a quote from somewhere else.
Other than that, not a bad article.
You might want to mention that the Vikings typically only carry 5 WRs in Chilly's tenure to help show just how important #5 is vs #6.The true measure of a man is what he'd do knowing he'd never be found out.
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08-13-2009, 03:07 PM #4
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
Johnson has apparently added 17 pounds this off-season, while lowing his body fat to an astonishing 3%.
Are you able to edit after it is posted?
Here is a small item.
It is the best bleacher report article that I have read.
It had a nice flow to it.
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08-13-2009, 03:10 PM #5
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Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
Great read.
I appreciate sharing it with us.
I got some information out of it I had not read any other place so thanks.
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Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
"snowinapril" wrote:
Thanks, I've made a few changes, fixed some spelling and commas.Johnson has apparently added 17 pounds this off-season, while lowing his body fat to an astonishing 3%.
Are you able to edit after it is posted?
Here is a small item.
It is the best bleacher report article that I have read.
It had a nice flow to it.
Appreciate the input guys.
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08-13-2009, 03:50 PM #7
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
Nice work.
Never thought you could put your words together so nicely..
=PVegans are eating the rainforests. =(

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08-13-2009, 04:01 PM #8
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
"BleedinPandG" wrote:
Pretty much what I was going to critique.You should quote your sources... I'm guessing the ST Coach, Chilly, and CC didn't say those things directly to you and you copied a quote from somewhere else.
Other than that, not a bad article.
You might want to mention that the Vikings typically only carry 5 WRs in Chilly's tenure to help show just how important #5 is vs #6.
Other than that very well put together

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"We’ll win our own Super Bowl, with our own players. Real Vikings. Something Brett Favre can never be."
- Dan Calabrese
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08-13-2009, 05:05 PM #9
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
Nice read my friend.
I bet you could use a cool one huh Clark...Now you're talkin Eddie...
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08-19-2009, 11:50 AM #10
Re: I wrote an article about the Vikings, would love your input
A well written article ibp, do you have any other insite for future article's? If so don't hesitate to let us have a look.
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