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    Poetry

    Anyone write poems?? I started last night.. If u want post yours up here too!!


    My Love Life:

    I stare at you, you don't seem to mind, You look back
    Body begins to feel flushed, I'm so nervous it's a panic attack

    We slowly begin to build a bond
    I wish the great moments can be re-wound

    I dial your number, you pick up, in come the butterflys
    This happens everytime, why can't I just find the words and ask you out?

    We visit a few places here and there, I have a blast
    Why don't these amazing moments tend to last?

    I'm losing my chance, you begin to look at other guys
    It's obvious to me that you want to part ties

    You don't want me, You want to be single, I understand
    It happened again, Just like everytime, I blew my chance god damn

    In a few years you'll forget me, Wish I was more confident
    Sorry i'm not the guy you wanted

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    Re: Poetry

    sweet poem man. I'm not any good but maybe I will try and make one just to post up here.

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    Re: Poetry

    Memories With You


    My heart is beating far too fast
    Arriving to your house atlast

    My mind is quickly racing
    Extend my hand for your taking

    I feel the extreme passion when we finally kiss
    Every moment with you I charish.. It's pure bliss

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    Re: Poetry

    Here is one that I wrote when I was 9:

    The thunderous redwoods tower over me;
    the strong bark surrounds me.
    There is a breeze whistling in my ear
    and the creaking of a branch high overhead.
    It is as if I am the only person in the world,
    alone in this monsterous forest.
    The animals scamper under my feet
    looking for food for the winter.
    The leaves and branches are quiet now,
    like a hunter ready to strike.
    The bees buzz by my face,
    leaving the small scent of pollen.
    In the distance, I hear the constant whir of a chainsaw;
    with horrible sounds, tree after tree comes crashing down.
    Then it stops and no birds are calling,
    no squirrels scampering and no bees buzzing.
    And for a moment, it is like a desert,
    with no signs of life.
    Once again I feel alone,
    nothing to keep me company, just the silent trees
    MC's run away when I kick it
    They act so chicken, they should come with a large drink and a biscuit
    -Canibus

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    Re: Poetry

    No one likes poetry?






    One Love

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    Re: Poetry

    "V4L" wrote:
    No one likes poetry?






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    Last year during my college orientation week, we all had to go see some slam poets. I figured it would be lame, just because I had an idea in my head of what they would be like, but it was amazing. The guys I saw had a true talent with words and a mastery of the English language.
    MC's run away when I kick it
    They act so chicken, they should come with a large drink and a biscuit
    -Canibus

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