Thread: Help me get an A!!

Hey everyone,
My group had to make a movie for class. They didn't do such a good job at
editing, so I was requested to fix it. We had to upload it to YouTube
and we get graded on how many times it's viewed. Please look at them both and
tell me which one is better. Forward this to all your address book to
get us more views!

I just put the links here because I wasn't sure it would
get the view count at YouTube if I put them here, and the view total
at YouTube is what is what will count.

Also, feel free to leave comments! (Please keep them clean)
I really would like to know what you think of my first try.
It's a documentary/comedy.

Thanks,
Fedje

Original by group:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aN3QosuMcy0


My revised version:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=09aNlXAwSx4

Thanks guys! I know it seems dumb, but that's what the youngsters came up with in that theme.

I spent hours editing the sound in Adobe Soundbooth so you could hear everyone throughout the movie. You guys can tell me if I did good, make suggestions for improvement the next time, etc.


My revised version:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=09aNlXAwSx4

Hey everyone,

We got the "A" and a prize of pizza for our group!

Thanks for viewing the movie,

Fedje

"FedjeViking" wrote:

Hey everyone,

We got the "A" and a prize of pizza for our group!

Thanks for viewing the movie,

Fedje

All you got was pizza?
That's not fair

"BadlandsViking" wrote:

"FedjeViking" wrote:

Hey everyone,

We got the "A" and a prize of pizza for our group!

Thanks for viewing the movie,

Fedje

All you got was pizza?
That's not fair

I didn't care about the pizza, I wanted the 'A'!

He also commented on someone in our group had good internet connections for the views!
;D

Over 500 views for both the original and my revised version!