My group had to make a movie for class. They didn't do such a good job at
editing, so I was requested to fix it. We had to upload it to YouTube
and we get graded on how many times it's viewed. Please look at them both and
tell me which one is better. Forward this to all your address book to
get us more views!
I just put the links here because I wasn't sure it would
get the view count at YouTube if I put them here, and the view total
at YouTube is what is what will count.
Also, feel free to leave comments! (Please keep them clean)
I really would like to know what you think of my first try.
It's a documentary/comedy.
Original by group:
My revised version: